NEWS
GMO SONIC Pre-Party to be Held on September 14th (Saturday) at RAISE! Plus, 20 Pairs (40 People) Will Be Invited for Free!
Road to GMO SONIC 2025″ Event is Confirmed!
We are thrilled to announce the official pre-party, featuring a collaboration with top DJs from Asia. In the first phase, we are excited to welcome “DJ MAI” from Taiwan. The first pre-party is sure to be an unforgettable night.
Additionally, we are running a campaign on the GMO SONIC social media accounts, offering free invitations for 20 pairs (40 people) via lottery! Don’t miss this opportunity to apply.
Note: Entry is limited to those aged 20 and over.
Please bring a valid ID for entry.
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Road to GMO SONIC 2025 ＠RAISE
ーASIA CONNECTIONー
September 14th (Saturday)
21:00 Open
Entrance Fee: M ￥4,000/2D
Late-Night Entrance: ￥1,000/2D
GUEST DJ
DJ MAI from TAIWAN
RAISE
5-2-1 Ginza, Chuo-ku, Tokyo, Tokyu Plaza Ginza 6F
https://raisetokyo.com/
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How to Apply for the Social Media Campaign
●X (Twitter)
Follow @gmosonic
Share the campaign post to complete your entry
●Instagram
Follow @gmosonic
Like the campaign post to complete your entry
Number of Winners
A total of 20 pairs (40 people)
Prize
Free invitation to the pre-party
(Entry details for the event will be communicated to winners via direct message.)
Application Period
Until 23:59 on September 10, 2024 (Tuesday)
Winner Announcement
Winners will be notified via direct message on each account on September 11, 2024 (Wednesday). Please check your message settings in advance.
Important Notice
Beware of impersonator accounts sending fake follow requests or prize notifications via DM. During this campaign period, we will not follow or send direct messages from our official account, so please stay alert to fake accounts.
Here is the translation of the provided text:
“Road to GMO SONIC 2025” Event is Confirmed!
We are thrilled to announce the official pre-party, featuring a collaboration with top DJs from Asia. In the first phase, we are excited to welcome “DJ MAI” from Taiwan. The first pre-party is sure to be an unforgettable night.
Additionally, we are running a campaign on the GMO SONIC social media accounts, where we will invite 20 pairs (40 people) for free via lottery! Don’t miss this opportunity, and make sure to apply.
Note: Entry is limited to those aged 20 and over. Please bring a valid ID for entry.
Road to GMO SONIC 2025 ＠RAISE ーASIA CONNECTIONー
September 14th (Saturday) 21:00 Open Entrance Fee: M4,000/2D Late: 1,000/2D
GUEST DJ DJ MAI from TAIWAN
RAISE
5-2-1 Ginza, Chuo-ku, Tokyo, Tokyu Plaza Ginza 6F
How to Apply for the Social Media Campaign
●X (Twitter)
Follow @gmosonic
Repost the campaign post to complete your entry
●Instagram
Follow @gmosonic
Like the campaign post to complete your entry
Number of Winners
A total of 20 pairs (40 people)
Prize
Free invitation to the pre-party
(The method of entry on the day will be communicated to winners via direct message.)
Application Period
Until 23:59 on September 10, 2024 (Tuesday)
Winner Announcement
Winners will be notified via direct message on each account on September 11, 2024 (Wednesday). Please make sure to check your message reception settings in advance.
Important Notice
Beware of impersonator accounts sending fake follow requests or prize notifications via DM. During this campaign period, we will not follow you or send direct messages from our official account, so please be cautious of fake accounts.
Terms and Conditions
This campaign is limited to residents of Japan.
Each person may enter only once.
The campaign may be suspended or changed without prior notice.
Entries from private accounts will be invalid, as we cannot send direct messages.
If you are not following the official account at the time of the campaign’s conclusion, your entry will be invalid.
We cannot respond to inquiries about the confirmation of entry, selection process, winning or losing, or any accidents or damages during delivery.
Employees of our company, their families, and related parties are not eligible to participate.
Entries from corporate accounts will not be included in the drawing.
We cannot ship prizes to addresses outside Japan. This campaign is for residents of Japan only.
There will be no re-drawing.
Winners will be notified via direct message, which will serve as the official announcement.
In cases where we deem fraudulent activity has occurred, if the DM does not reach you due to poor communication environment, or if you do not complete the necessary procedures within the response period of the DM notification, your winning entry will be invalidated.
The resale of prizes is prohibited.
If you are not following the account or do not meet the entry requirements at the time of the draw, your entry will be invalid.
For the handling of personal information collected from winners, please refer to the “Privacy Policy” on the GMO Internet Group’s website (https://www.gmo.jp/csr/governance/privacy-policy/). By participating in this campaign, you are deemed to have agreed to the handling of personal information.
Evaluation
Score: 95/100
Native Check: The translation is very accurate overall. However, a few areas could be reworded for better flow and naturalness, especially in marketing contexts such as “campaign post” (could use “campaign entry” for smoother reading) and “late fee” instead of “late.”
Proofreading Improvements
Change “repost” to “share” on Instagram and X for smoother reading.
Clarify that the “late” fee refers to late-night entrance.
Adjust the phrase “entry on the day” to “entry details on the event day” for better clarity.
Final Version:
“Road to GMO SONIC 2025” Event is Confirmed!
We are thrilled to announce the official pre-party, featuring a collaboration with top DJs from Asia. In the first phase, we are excited to welcome “DJ MAI” from Taiwan. The first pre-party is sure to be an unforgettable night.
Additionally, we are running a campaign on the GMO SONIC social media accounts, offering free invitations for 20 pairs (40 people) via lottery! Don’t miss this opportunity to apply.
Note: Entry is limited to those aged 20 and over.
Please bring a valid ID for entry.
Road to GMO SONIC 2025 ＠RAISE
ーASIA CONNECTIONー
September 14th (Saturday)
21:00 Open
Entrance Fee: M4,000/2D
Late-Night Entrance: 1,000/2D
GUEST DJ
DJ MAI from TAIWAN
RAISE
5-2-1 Ginza, Chuo-ku, Tokyo, Tokyu Plaza Ginza 6F
How to Apply for the Social Media Campaign
●X (Twitter)
Follow @gmosonic
Share the campaign post to complete your entry
●Instagram
Follow @gmosonic
Like the campaign post to complete your entry
Number of Winners
A total of 20 pairs (40 people)
Prize
Free invitation to the pre-party
(Entry details for the event will be communicated to winners via direct message.)
Application Period
Until 23:59 on September 10, 2024 (Tuesday)
Winner Announcement
Winners will be notified via direct message on each account on September 11, 2024 (Wednesday). Please check your message settings in advance.
Important Notice
Beware of impersonator accounts sending fake follow requests or prize notifications via DM. During this campaign period, we will not follow or send direct messages from our official account, so please stay alert to fake accounts.
Terms and Conditions
This campaign is limited to residents of Japan.
Each person may enter only once.
The campaign may be suspended or changed without prior notice.
Entries from private accounts will be invalid, as we cannot send direct messages.
If you are not following the official account at the time the campaign ends, your entry will be invalid.
We cannot respond to inquiries about the confirmation of entry, selection process, results, or any accidents or damages during delivery.
Employees of our company, their families, and related parties are not eligible to participate.
Entries from corporate accounts are not eligible for the drawing.
Prizes cannot be shipped outside Japan. This campaign is for residents of Japan only.
There will be no re-drawing.
Winners will be notified via direct message, which will serve as the official announcement.
If we suspect any fraudulent activity, or if the DM cannot be delivered due to poor communication settings, or if you do not complete the necessary steps within the response period of the DM notification, your win will be invalidated.
Reselling of prizes is prohibited.
If you are not following the account or do not meet the entry requirements at the time of the draw, your entry will be invalid.
For the handling of personal information, please refer to the “Privacy Policy” on the GMO Internet Group’s website (https://www.gmo.jp/csr/governance/privacy-policy/). By participating in this campaign, you are deemed to have agreed to the handling of personal information.